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| Digital Art / Photomanipulation / Conceptual | ©2009-2013 *chemoelectric |
; I'll be much more critical about the choice of poses. At the beach the girl is with a very natural pose, in the street more "posed " but ok. Also her arm is made too black by the treatment, it appears at a thin stick at first glance. And I dont like at all the pose on the mirror, artificial and bored, and the use made of deepness of field is poor : the details of the room ( like door, something on the floor ) are too much there. And I hardly see the need for the white stripes in your overall composition. So keep working on the concept, make it simpler and stronger. So sorry to be a bit negative on this, just go on ! And thank you for using my stock and linking back. 
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